Comments for room 14's writing hot spot

Comment on Melissa M.’s First Expository Post! by Melissa M.

Melissa M. — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 23:32:24 +0000

Erica your story is very nice. I hope you like my story as much as I liked yours=]

Comment on Eilee’s First Expository Post! by monserath

monserath — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 02:36:50 +0000

Eilee, I really love your story so much and I really love your details.

Comment on Othon’s First Expository Post! by MelissaM.

MelissaM. — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 23:17:21 +0000

This is the best you can do Othon; I can tell because all of the detail in the story!

Comment on Daniel S’s First Expository Post! by melissa m.

melissa m. — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 00:14:06 +0000

Daniel this story is the best you can do. I can tell because of all the detail. Keep working hard.

Comment on Alin’s First Expository Post! by melissa m.

melissa m. — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 00:10:08 +0000

Alin your story is really nice, I hope you like my story too.

Comment on Erika’s First Expository Post by melissa m.

melissa m. — Wed, 30 Dec 2009 00:07:16 +0000

I like this story Erika, it’s really a nice story.

Comment on Alin’s First Expository Post! by monserath

monserath — Sat, 19 Dec 2009 01:18:11 +0000

Alin, I really like your story a lot. I’m lucky to have a friend like you and you’re nice. I hope you leave a comment on my story.

Comment on Alin’s First Expository Post! by monserath

monserath — Sat, 19 Dec 2009 01:11:38 +0000

Alin, I really like your story a lot. I’m lucky to have a friend like you and you are always friendly.

Comment on Alin’s First Expository Post! by monserath

monserath — Sat, 19 Dec 2009 01:10:04 +0000

Alin, I really like your story and I’m happy to be your friend.

Comment on Last Friday’s Oil Pastel Adventure! by Mrs. Jaffe

Mrs. Jaffe — Thu, 03 Sep 2009 00:13:55 +0000

I agree! Jasmine, you truly understand how to SEE the road. Your artistic perspective demonstrates where you are on the road and how far away it can stretch. Keep playing with the angles, it almost can become a geometry (or tangrams) type puzzle.