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Alin’s First Narrative Post

May 12th, 2010 · 2 Comments · Uncategorized

Someone Who Wants to Copy
by
Alin

       One afternoon when I was doing my homework at home my friend Gabriel came over. He asked me if he could copy my math homework. So I said, “No! You already copied my homework one time and I’m not going to let you copy my homework again!”

      The next day he begged and was bobbing up and down around me to let him copy my homework. Then I still said, “No because copying is wrong.” So I asked him, “Why do you want to copy my math homework?” So he blurted, “I don’t know how to do my math homework.” I said, “That’s not bad, just trying your best.”

       When he was about to leave I asked him if he wanted me to help him on his math homework, not copy. So he said, “Yes I do want help from you.” So I was getting ready to help Gabriel with his math homework.

       The next morning Gabriel came to my house and said, “Are you ready to help me with my math homework?” I said, “Yes I am ready to help you with you with your math homework.” When I was helping him I said, “You know why I said no for copying because I don’t know if I going to get them wrong or right. He said, “That’s why you didn’t let me copy your math homework.”
After that it became fun helping Gabriel with his math homework. One of the reasons is because after I am finished helping him, were allowed to play the wii. The other reason is he gets to stay and eat a snack with me. When he left I was exhausted.

       But when he knew how to do his math homework he said, “I don’t need anymore help with my math homework.” I said, “That is good but are you coming to my house everyday.” He said, “Yes I’m still coming to your to your house everyday.”

        Later when he left to go to school, and the teacher said to turn in our homework. So when Gabriel turned in his homework. When the teacher was finished she gave us our homework back to see how we did. So when the teacher gave Gabriel his homework he got one hundred percent. I said, “Good job getting one hundred percent!” So he said, “If it wasn’t for you I wouldn’t get one hundred percent. When he was finished he said “Thank you!” So when I got home I had a lovely day.

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