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David’s First Narrative Post

April 27th, 2010 · 4 Comments · Uncategorized

Homework Problem 

by David 

           One day with some substantial nimbus clouds I, wearing my parent’s unyielding raincoat with eight buttons was at Jason’s accommodations. He was doing a surveillance mission on his sibling. Unlike me, I was doing my intolerable math assignment. It was genuinely intolerable; I only completed two interrogations. He approached me and said “I uh… need uh… your uh… math assignment again.” “Why do you want my math assignment again?” I replied. “I need your math assignments because I want to check your reciprocations if they are erroneous!” He yelled. “Ok” I muttered. I was cogitating. I said to myself.

          “If he had my math assignment, would he alter my name?” I came up to him. He imitated my reciprocations. “Why did you duplicate my answers? “Because… because… I didn’t comprehend it and I still did not finish my math obligation in two days. I might get detention for two weeks! The school will call my parents and I’ll get grounded again, for a month!” He cried. “So, may I assist you?” I replied, curiously. “Oh, yes, yes, yes, yes…” “Ok, Ok, you can stop saying yes” I interrupted. “Do you know the subject?” I asked. “Yes.” “What is it then?” “It’s about the millionths’ place.” “Correct.” You just have to go left seven times and insert it.” “Oh, THANK YOU!!!” “OW…” I told Jason.  “Sorry.” He apologized. “Thanks, can you do it by yourself now?” I said. “Yes, just thank you for the help.” “You’re welcome.”  The next day, Jason finally turned his homework.

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4 Comments so far ↓

  • edwinfernandez

    Dear David,
    I really liked your story and if you worked so hard, then I worked hard, too. David, since you were my best friend, you’re still going to be my be my best friend ever.

  • Melissa M.

    I love your story David. I hope you read and like my story.

  • samantha

    David I loved your story keep up the work!

  • Dodeelee Lagatic

    Hello David,
    That was good, we are so proud of you.

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