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Edwin’s First Expository Post!

December 14th, 2009 · 2 Comments · Expository Essays

 Getting Ready for Bed

by

Edwin

                    When I was getting ready for bed, I grabbed the clothes.  I would put on when I finish in my shower.

                    First, I take a shower. In my shower I get the shampoo and then scrub my hair twice.

                     Next, I put on my pajamas.  My pajamas are so colorful like a shining rainbow.

                     Finally, I brush my teeth three times because I want to keep my teeth clean all day long. Plus, I don’t want cavities. I brush behind my teeth too.

                    My bunk-beds are the best because they’re soft and cozy. I sleep on top because my younger brother, Leo, might roll and fall down. The way I get up my bed is that I use a ladder attached to the stone.

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2 Comments so far ↓

  • edwin

    Myself, I could done a better job, so next time, I’m going to do a better job. I hope I have good day and I’ll succeed.

  • edwin

    Man, I think next time I shall do a better job than I did before, so I will succeed one day or week.

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