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Jasmine’s Narrative Post

June 2nd, 2009 · 1 Comment · Uncategorized

Wings

by Jasmine

                                   

One morning, I felt something on my back. Afterward, I ate pancakes and sausages.  Next, I went to go play video games. All of a sudden, I was inside the video game!

 

That’s when the funny thing on my back stopped, and I looked behind me. I had sparkly, blue wings. I said to myself “My dream finally came true!” 

 

Then, I started flapping my wings. I was flapping my sparkly blue wings faster and faster. Suddenly, I started to fly higher and higher! I looked down, and everything was so small! I thought this was all dream, but it wasn’t! I also wasn’t inside the video game! My mom said, “We’re going to go to the surgeon as fast we can! C’mon.”

                                   

While mom was driving she was also growing wings, but hers were black and white; my mom’s two favorite colors! I said to mom “ Mom do you know you are also growing wings?” Mom said “No why ”Then I said because you are growing wings! My mom said “Ahhhh” so she drove even faster to the medical doctor. The doctor thought she was joking! My mom finished explaining our story to her. The doctor said “You two have to stay at home until you don’t have wings anymore.”

 

The next day, we didn’t have our wings, but we can breathe out fire instead! But, that is another horrible, terrible story! “L

 

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  • Mom-Cheryl Casas

    By far this is your best story yet…I LOVE YOU…thanks for including me.

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