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Brittany’s Narrative Post

May 20, 2009 · No Comments

 The Big Giant!

 

by Brittany

 

             One hot Saturday morning, Janae and I decided to walk to the Bobby Due Park. After that, we got to the playground, we started to play tether ball. After we were done, playing tether ball we sat down to have a picnic. And then we saw Cat Zillah. She was very big, tall and hairy.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     

             As we were eating a sandwich and barbecue chips we noticed Cat Zillah sitting down too. Janae and I asked Cat Zillah if she wanted to play tether ball with us after we were done eating. And Cat Zillah said, “Yes.”  We told Cat Zillah, “Do you know how to play tetherball?” And she said, “Yes I do know how to play tetherball.”    

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              So, after Janae and I were done eating we played tether ball with Cat Zillah. She is really tall so she could beat Janae and I all the time. After that, we went home and Cat Zillah went home as well.J    

 

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