room 11's writing hot spot

Giant Robot Attack

by Jose

            One day, I went to the park and a giant appeared. Do you want to hear the exciting story? My dad drove to the Jackson Park with my family. We got there and my dad and I played Football. My mom and sisters went to the swings and slides. I saw Cande and Enrique and played with them. Then, my mom said, “Run!” because she saw the bulky giant.

            We were running then he got my mom and sisters, next he got us. He ate everybody first, except me. It was funny when everyone was eaten. I was scared when he was going to eat me.

            He said to me, “You’re dessert.” So, I told him a comical joke. He let me go so I jumped and broke his robot antenna. Then he was ruined. Last, my family, Enrique, Cande and I went home.