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The Very Hot Day

by Enrique

            One hot day my mom, sister, Jose, Cande, Ariel and I were going to have fun at the San Diego Jackson Park. When we got to the park we started playing with other children at the park.

 A while later a purple, hideous giant suddenly appeared. He asks if he can play with us. We said, “Yes you can play with us.’’ We played tag, hide and seek and then we ate. The park was fun and amazing.

Later that day it was time to go home. The giant said, “No you are going stay to here!’’ The giant wouldn’t let us go home!

We were panicking so bad that my sister and Jose said that we are going to be eaten. Several hours later my mom said, “We are getting out of here once and for all!’’ Last, my mom got all of the milk out of the car and then made a huge mug out of tree bark and branches. Then, we warmed up the sweet, delicious milk in the sun for a few hours.

Finally, we gave the purple, hideous giant the milk. He drank it and fell asleep. My mom said, “We are free now, we can go home once and for all!’’