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Entries from May 14th, 2009

Enrique’s Narrative Post

May 14th, 2009 · 2 Comments · Uncategorized

The Very Hot Day
 
by Enrique
 
            One hot day my mom, sister, Jose, Cande, Ariel and I were going to have fun at the San Diego Jackson Park. When we got to the park we started playing with other children at the park.
 
 A while later a purple, hideous giant suddenly appeared. He asks if he can [...]

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Amber Ann’s Narrative Post

May 14th, 2009 · No Comments · Uncategorized

          My OWN World

by Amber Ann
 

I woke up one morning, and had blue wings. So I called Jasmine, Amber and Janae. They had black, blue and pink wings. Then, we called Angelica on the telephone and she had purple wings! Then Angelica said, “Lets have our own world.” But Janae said, “How long will it [...]

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