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Entries from May 2009

“Think About” Responses, Typing Writing Prompts, and Using the New Elmo

May 23rd, 2009 · No Comments

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Finally, Our April 10th Message Board Seminar!

May 23rd, 2009 · No Comments

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Friday: Adventures in Oil Pastels

May 22nd, 2009 · No Comments

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Amber Rose’s Narrative Post

May 20th, 2009 · No Comments

My Wingyest Adventure

 

          by Amber Rose

 

                       One hot summer morning Amber and I woke up. She looked at me and I looked at her and we yelled! Then, “We both said, you have wings! “What?’’ “I do?’’ “You do?’’ “Wait.’’ “Come down.” “Now let’s fly.’’ Then we flew everywhere in my house.                                                     

 

                        We started to get tired. Our purple and blue spotted wings got tired too. We fell down. Amber said, “I’m hot.’’ “Me too, let’s get ice-cream.’’ “Ok.’’ said Amber. “Lets go then,’’ I said So we went to the ice-cream shop. We had trouble getting in and out the door. I got chocolate and Amber got vanilla.

                                           

 

                        Amber`s ice-cream fell. She cried and cried. I said, “It`s ok. I’ll get you another ice-cream.’’ So we got anther ice-cream for Amber. Then we flew home.           JJ

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Brittany’s Narrative Post

May 20th, 2009 · No Comments

 The Big Giant!

 

by Brittany

 

             One hot Saturday morning, Janae and I decided to walk to the Bobby Due Park. After that, we got to the playground, we started to play tether ball. After we were done, playing tether ball we sat down to have a picnic. And then we saw Cat Zillah. She was very big, tall and hairy.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     

             As we were eating a sandwich and barbecue chips we noticed Cat Zillah sitting down too. Janae and I asked Cat Zillah if she wanted to play tether ball with us after we were done eating. And Cat Zillah said, “Yes.”  We told Cat Zillah, “Do you know how to play tetherball?” And she said, “Yes I do know how to play tetherball.”    

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              So, after Janae and I were done eating we played tether ball with Cat Zillah. She is really tall so she could beat Janae and I all the time. After that, we went home and Cat Zillah went home as well.J    

 

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Jose’s Narrative Post

May 15th, 2009 · No Comments

Giant Robot Attack

 

by Jose

 

            One day, I went to the park and a giant appeared. Do you want to hear the exciting story? My dad drove to the Jackson Park with my family. We got there and my dad and I played Football. My mom and sisters went to the swings and slides. I saw Cande and Enrique and played with them. Then, my mom said, “Run!” because she saw the bulky giant.

 

            We were running then he got my mom and sisters, next he got us. He ate everybody first, except me. It was funny when everyone was eaten. I was scared when he was going to eat me.

 

            He said to me, “You’re dessert.” So, I told him a comical joke. He let me go so I jumped and broke his robot antenna. Then he was ruined. Last, my family, Enrique, Cande and I went home.

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Enrique’s Narrative Post

May 14th, 2009 · 2 Comments

The Very Hot Day

 

by Enrique

 

            One hot day my mom, sister, Jose, Cande, Ariel and I were going to have fun at the San Diego Jackson Park. When we got to the park we started playing with other children at the park.

 

 A while later a purple, hideous giant suddenly appeared. He asks if he can play with us. We said, “Yes you can play with us.’’ We played tag, hide and seek and then we ate. The park was fun and amazing.

 

Later that day it was time to go home. The giant said, “No you are going stay to here!’’ The giant wouldn’t let us go home!

 

We were panicking so bad that my sister and Jose said that we are going to be eaten. Several hours later my mom said, “We are getting out of here once and for all!’’ Last, my mom got all of the milk out of the car and then made a huge mug out of tree bark and branches. Then, we warmed up the sweet, delicious milk in the sun for a few hours.

 

Finally, we gave the purple, hideous giant the milk. He drank it and fell asleep. My mom said, “We are free now, we can go home once and for all!’’ 

 

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Amber Ann’s Narrative Post

May 14th, 2009 · No Comments

          My OWN World

by Amber Ann

 

I woke up one morning, and had blue wings. So I called Jasmine, Amber and Janae. They had black, blue and pink wings. Then, we called Angelica on the telephone and she had purple wings! Then Angelica said, “Lets have our own world.” But Janae said, “How long will it take?” So we decided to not do that because it would take a long time. Then, we can have a wing celebration party!

 

Well, school is tomorrow and I have wings. I started to cry because   everyone will laugh. I went to sleep and I woke up in Florida. My wings flew me to Florida. I have a problem; they wouldn’t take me home! I said, stop. Then they took me to school. It was already time for class. My teacher said to go to the office. The office said, “Take them off.” I said, “But they’re real.” The office said, “Go home and go to sleep.” Then I woke up and had a tail. That’s another story.

                       

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