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Jasmine’s Narrative Post

March 26th, 2009 · 3 Comments · Uncategorized

My Twin Giant

 

by Jasmine

                   

 

After school, in a hot summer day my sister and I always go to our park, in the neighborhood. We play tag on the grass because it’s safer. Then, we go on the slide. My sister wanted me to go first.  

 

           All of a sudden, a big giant pops up and that is when I got off the big slide. Then, I looked closer at the giant, and that’s when I knew it was I! She had light brown hair just like me! She had brown eyes just like me! She also was wearing the same cloths that I was wearing, I jumped then the giant jumped.  I got chalk and I drew the hopscotch on the cement. I did hopscotch, but not just me, the giant also did hopscotch too!

         

          So I named her Jasmine just like me. So now I have a twin! 

           

          My sister came off the big slide, and then one more giant popped up! Guess what happened? Whatever we did, the giant did too!

 

          So, now my sister and I will always have a twin and we will always go to the park because that was an incredible adventure in our lives!

                                                                                         

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3 Comments so far ↓

  • Judy Caton

    What a great story! You are sure learning alot this year (also the other students) Enjoyed the dancing too!. Keep up the great work.
    I love you as always, Grandma

  • Brittany

    Hi! Jasmine I like your story and I wish I could have a giant twin:)

  • Mom-Cheryl Casas

    Funny/ silly story…of course I think it is wonderful…Love Mom

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