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Giant Girl

by Amber Rose

            One hot summer day my mom, Jasmine, and I went to the Giant Park. My mom left after she dropped us off. After, she left we found a giant! She had black hair and eyes. We ran away. We were super scared. She said, “Can I play with you?’’ We didn’t say anything. We felt the hot sun beaming on us. Then, we said, “Ok. But you have to be good ok.’’ “Ok’’ said the  giant.        

            We went to play on the playground. First, we went to the swings. Jasmine and I loved them. But the giant, who was wearing a polka dot dress, didn’t fit in the swing! Then, we tried the monkey bars, she still did not fit. So we tried the slides. Bingo! She fit.We saw that she did not fit on the little slide.We said, “To just go on the big slide.’’ We played and played. Then, we stopped playing.                                                                                                                             

 I said to Jasmine, “It’s time to go home.’’ But before I could finish my sentence the giant said “NO!’’ Then, she tied us up, and fell asleep. We untied ourselves. Soon, Jasmine came back with a big box. We put the giant in the box. The two of us slapped hands. And, said, “ Good bye.’’ We went home after that. What a day.