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Entries from March 26th, 2009

Jasmine’s Narrative Post

March 26th, 2009 · 3 Comments · Uncategorized

My Twin Giant   by Jasmine                       After school, in a hot summer day my sister and I always go to our park, in the neighborhood. We play tag on the grass because it’s safer. Then, we go on the slide. My sister wanted me to go first.                All of a sudden, [...]

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Amber Rose’s Narrative Post

March 26th, 2009 · No Comments · Uncategorized

Giant Girl   by Amber Rose             One hot summer day my mom, Jasmine, and I went to the Giant Park. My mom left after she dropped us off. After, she left we found a giant! She had black hair and eyes. We ran away. We were super scared. She said, “Can I play with [...]

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