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Entries from March 26th, 2009

Jasmine’s Narrative Post

March 26th, 2009 · 3 Comments · Uncategorized

My Twin Giant
 
by Jasmine
                   
 
After school, in a hot summer day my sister and I always go to our park, in the neighborhood. We play tag on the grass because it’s safer. Then, we go on the slide. My sister wanted me to go first.  
 
           All of a sudden, a big giant pops up [...]

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Amber Rose’s Narrative Post

March 26th, 2009 · No Comments · Uncategorized

Giant Girl
 
by Amber Rose
            One hot summer day my mom, Jasmine, and I went to the Giant Park. My mom left after she dropped us off. After, she left we found a giant! She had black hair and eyes. We ran away. We were super scared. She said, “Can I play with you?’’ We didn’t [...]

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