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My Giant Dog, My Brother and Me

by Ariel

                     One hot afternoon my brother and I were having fun. I was climbing a big, red web in the center of the park. My brother, Daniel was playing Tetherball against a stick. Daniel lost the match.                                                                                                                                                                                                                        As the sun rose, Daniel heard a bark but he ignored it. A few minutes later, when my brother got off the slide he heard the bark again. He reached into my backpack and got his ball out. As soon as my brother got his ball a giant dog came out. The dog laid his eyes on my brother’s ball. He said, “Lets play ball.” My brother threw his ball thinking it will send the giant dog away, but it didn’t.                                                                                                                                                 

                      Daniel started to cry. I told him,“ It’s going to be ok.” My brother cried so loud that the dog heard it. The dog felt bad. The massive dog jumped over the fence with my brother’s ball. Then we had fun.