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Cande’s Narrative Post

March 23rd, 2009 · No Comments · Uncategorized

We Lost Our Dessert

                                                                                                      

By Candelario

 

 

One hot afternoon my mom drove my sister, Jose, Juan, Ariel, and I to the Canada Red Road Park. When we got to the park we had fun with lots of other children.                                                                                                                                                                         

Then later that day, a giant with a green shirt, red soft hair, blue pants, and black shoes popped out of nowhere. The giant bellowed out, “I want some nourishment!” But I told the giant we have no nourishment. So the giant got mad and picked up my sister, Jose, mom, Juan, and said, “I will eat you ants!”                                                                                                                                        

But Jose said, “Wait I have a candy cane! The giant stared at the candy cane and he had a face like he was going to say yum! He let go of us, grabbed the candy cane from Jose and ran to Christmas World. We said, “Awhh that was our dessert!”  

                       

              So, that is how we lost our sweets!

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