room 14’s writing hot spot

My Twin Giant

by Jasmine

After school, in a hot summer day my sister and I always go to our park, in the neighborhood. We play tag on the grass because it’s safer. Then, we go on the slide. My sister wanted me to go first.  

           All of a sudden, a big giant pops up and that is when I got off the big slide. Then, I looked closer at the giant, and that’s when I knew it was I! She had light brown hair just like me! She had brown eyes just like me! She also was wearing the same cloths that I was wearing, I jumped then the giant jumped.  I got chalk and I drew the hopscotch on the cement. I did hopscotch, but not just me, the giant also did hopscotch too!

          So I named her Jasmine just like me. So now I have a twin! 

          My sister came off the big slide, and then one more giant popped up! Guess what happened? Whatever we did, the giant did too!

          So, now my sister and I will always have a twin and we will always go to the park because that was an incredible adventure in our lives!

Giant Girl

by Amber Rose

            One hot summer day my mom, Jasmine, and I went to the Giant Park. My mom left after she dropped us off. After, she left we found a giant! She had black hair and eyes. We ran away. We were super scared. She said, “Can I play with you?’’ We didn’t say anything. We felt the hot sun beaming on us. Then, we said, “Ok. But you have to be good ok.’’ “Ok’’ said the  giant.        

            We went to play on the playground. First, we went to the swings. Jasmine and I loved them. But the giant, who was wearing a polka dot dress, didn’t fit in the swing! Then, we tried the monkey bars, she still did not fit. So we tried the slides. Bingo! She fit.We saw that she did not fit on the little slide.We said, “To just go on the big slide.’’ We played and played. Then, we stopped playing.                                                                                                                             

 I said to Jasmine, “It’s time to go home.’’ But before I could finish my sentence the giant said “NO!’’ Then, she tied us up, and fell asleep. We untied ourselves. Soon, Jasmine came back with a big box. We put the giant in the box. The two of us slapped hands. And, said, “ Good bye.’’ We went home after that. What a day.

My Giant Dog, My Brother and Me

by Ariel

                     One hot afternoon my brother and I were having fun. I was climbing a big, red web in the center of the park. My brother, Daniel was playing Tetherball against a stick. Daniel lost the match.                                                                                                                                                                                                                        As the sun rose, Daniel heard a bark but he ignored it. A few minutes later, when my brother got off the slide he heard the bark again. He reached into my backpack and got his ball out. As soon as my brother got his ball a giant dog came out. The dog laid his eyes on my brother’s ball. He said, “Lets play ball.” My brother threw his ball thinking it will send the giant dog away, but it didn’t.                                                                                                                                                 

                      Daniel started to cry. I told him,“ It’s going to be ok.” My brother cried so loud that the dog heard it. The dog felt bad. The massive dog jumped over the fence with my brother’s ball. Then we had fun. 

We Lost Our Dessert

By Candelario

One hot afternoon my mom drove my sister, Jose, Juan, Ariel, and I to the Canada Red Road Park. When we got to the park we had fun with lots of other children.                                                                                                                                                                         

Then later that day, a giant with a green shirt, red soft hair, blue pants, and black shoes popped out of nowhere. The giant bellowed out, “I want some nourishment!” But I told the giant we have no nourishment. So the giant got mad and picked up my sister, Jose, mom, Juan, and said, “I will eat you ants!”                                                                                                                                        

But Jose said, “Wait I have a candy cane! The giant stared at the candy cane and he had a face like he was going to say yum! He let go of us, grabbed the candy cane from Jose and ran to Christmas World. We said, “Awhh that was our dessert!”  

              So, that is how we lost our sweets!