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Entries from March 26th, 2009

Jasmine’s Narrative Post

March 26th, 2009 · 3 Comments · Uncategorized

My Twin Giant
 
by Jasmine
                   
 
After school, in a hot summer day my sister and I always go to our park, in the neighborhood. We play tag on the grass because it’s safer. Then, we go on the slide. My sister wanted me to go first.  
 
           All of a sudden, a big giant pops up [...]

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Amber Rose’s Narrative Post

March 26th, 2009 · No Comments · Uncategorized

Giant Girl
 
by Amber Rose
            One hot summer day my mom, Jasmine, and I went to the Giant Park. My mom left after she dropped us off. After, she left we found a giant! She had black hair and eyes. We ran away. We were super scared. She said, “Can I play with you?’’ We didn’t [...]

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Ariel’s Narrative Post

March 24th, 2009 · No Comments · Uncategorized

My Giant Dog, My Brother and Me
by Ariel
 
                     One hot afternoon my brother and I were having fun. I was climbing a big, red web in the center of the park. My brother, Daniel was playing Tetherball against a stick. Daniel lost the match.                                                                                                                                       [...]

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Cande’s Narrative Post

March 23rd, 2009 · No Comments · Uncategorized

We Lost Our Dessert
                                                                                                      
By Candelario
 
 
One hot afternoon my mom drove my sister, Jose, Juan, Ariel, and I to the Canada Red Road Park. When we got to the park we had fun with lots of other children.                                                                                                                                                                         
Then later that day, a giant with a green shirt, red soft hair, blue pants, and black [...]

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Where all the writing happens…

March 22nd, 2009 · 5 Comments · Uncategorized

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The writers have been dancing!

March 22nd, 2009 · 3 Comments · Uncategorized

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