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My Christmas Toy

by Juan

                     When I am eating my dad doesn’t let me play with the Nintendo DS. When I was drinking water outside, the water went in the Nintendo DS and it exploded! I went in my house and my mom said to me, “Happy Christmas.” My mom bought me a new Nintendo DS. I am happy every day even at school. When I finish my homework I play with my Nintendo DS. Then, I go with my friends to play with my Nintendo DS. I let some of them play with my Nintendo DS.