My Favorite Toy
By Amber Rose
My favorite toys are my bratz dolls, and they stay in a milkcarton. I feel their hair. When I feel their hair, it is soft. Also, when I feel their hair it is straight and yellow. I love to look at their clothes. When I look at their clothes I see designs of a kitty, pig, and a frog. They have pink sparkly clothes and soft red clothes. It is important we know about bratzs dolls because they are interesting.
One characteristic of a bratz doll is that they have big heads. On their heads, they have eyes, mouths, and noses .As mentioned above, bratzs dolls have colorful clothes and they are entertaining. An example is that they are cool and fun. How much do you know about bratzs dolls?
DearAmberRose,
I real like your writing about your favorite toy .It must be real hard to pick your favorite one.The reason why I like your story is that I play with bratzs dolls to.I also like the way you described the kitty, pig, and frog.That is all I have to say but, in the meantime keep on writing amazing stories.
Love ,
Janae
Hi AmberRose,
I am Janae`s sister.I like your story about your favorite toy.I like your story because I like to play with bratz dolls.My favorite bratz doll is Cloe.Cloe`s hair is yellow.I will say it again “I like your story.” I wish I can see more of your amazing story`s.
Love,
Janae`s sister Anissa