room 14’s writing hot spot

My Favorite Toy

By Janae

                        I have many toys in my room, but my favorite toy is my Nintendo D.S. I got my Nintendo D.S. when I was 5 and when it was my second Christmas. My Nintendo D.S. has glitter on it and the glitter is called Lava Glitter. The glitter is red and sparkly. The volume of my Nintendo D.S. is not really loud, but, it`s very low. I have many games that are loud. For example my Hannah Montana World Tour  is  very  loud. The other game that`s loud is the Cheeta Girls and their tour.

                                    I have other games that are really, really, fun. I can see my face in the little window. I wonder who creates the characters? The next day I was walking down the row in Target and I saw a game called the Plain White T `s. I begged my mom for it. When it was my birthday I got the Plain White T`s game. The present was from my mom. I told my mom, “It was the greatest present ever! I love it!”

                                    Now you know all about my favorite toy and my favorite game. I hope you can see it for real. I think it will be really, really, fun.

My Christmas Toy

by Juan

                     When I am eating my dad doesn’t let me play with the Nintendo DS. When I was drinking water outside, the water went in the Nintendo DS and it exploded! I went in my house and my mom said to me, “Happy Christmas.” My mom bought me a new Nintendo DS. I am happy every day even at school. When I finish my homework I play with my Nintendo DS. Then, I go with my friends to play with my Nintendo DS. I let some of them play with my Nintendo DS.

My Favorite Toy

 By Amber Rose

                        My favorite toys are my bratz dolls, and they stay in a milkcarton. I feel their hair. When I feel their hair, it is soft. Also, when I feel their hair it is straight and yellow. I love to look at their clothes. When I look at their clothes I see designs of a kitty, pig, and a frog. They have pink sparkly clothes and soft red clothes. It is important we know about bratzs dolls because they are interesting.                                                                              

                        One characteristic of a bratz doll is that they have big heads. On their heads, they have eyes, mouths, and noses .As mentioned above, bratzs dolls have colorful clothes and they are entertaining. An example is that they are cool and fun. How much do you know about bratzs dolls?