My Favorite Toy
By Ivan
I have a remote control airplane. I can see it clear in the sky. I can spin my airplane in the sky with the colors yellow, red, and black stripes. Whenever my cousin comes to my house I ask him if he could race my airplane but he has to run on the sidewalk. But I win because my airplane is in the air. One morning I gasp! I almost hit the airplane into my narrow hallway. I thought my airplane was going to break so I made a fast turn, I was lucky. Thank you for reading!
Hi, Mrs. Jaffe I am Ivan’s mom. I really think that by putting the kids story in this site is a really good way of motivating them of doing an excellent work. It’s really nice of you. I just want to say thank you for helping Ivan get this far.
Wow! You’re the first person from our community of learners to respond with a comment! Thanks Lilly for posting. We think it is tremendously exciting to see our essays published. Keep checking back. Chris