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Entries from January 2009

Ariel’s Expository Post

January 30th, 2009 · 1 Comment

My Special Toy

By Ariel

 

                       Under my bed I have a bunch of toys but my favorite toy is my Trybot. TryBots can be very noisy. For example, when it crashes into a big, brown couch it beeps louder than you. In addition, when a blue car tries to hit its owner, Trybots beep and the car stops.

             

When TryBots are mad there’s no telling what they will do. One time I was playing outside and I heard a scream. It was my TryBot! It was having too much fun!

 

When my Trybot is mad it feels many different ways. If my Trybot is sad its back feels bumpy. When he yells he has a skinny stomach.

 

A Trybot is fun but it can cause big problems.   

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Candelario’s expository post

January 30th, 2009 · No Comments

MY   FAVORITE   TOY

By:  Cande

 

        How much do you know about Tech Decks? If you don’t know about them, well   now is the time you learn! I have many Tech Decks. Tech Decks are toy skateboards that are small, not too small. They’re big enough for my fingers to flip them. Tech Decks have small wheels. 

         I have many Tech Decks that are red, black and blue. They are not that large. I am telling you about my favorite toy but many Tech Decks are the same but with different colors and designs. I hide my Tech Decks where nobody can get them. Whenever I share with the Tech Decks I would ask the person if they would like to have the Tech Deck. I have many Tech Decks that are very special to me.

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Jasmine’s expository post

January 30th, 2009 · 4 Comments

My Laptop

 

By Jasmine

 

I love my laptop so much because you could do a lot on it. You could play games on it like bowling. You have to type so fast to get a strike.  If you don’t type fast you won’t get a strike! So type fast to get 100%!

  You might also hear it quiet or loud. When someone is sleeping I put the volume quiet so they could sleep well. When someone is not sleeping then, I put it on loud.

   I can also do math! You could do division. I am learning it in school. I’m also getting the hang of it. I could also do multiplication! It’s really easy. I know how to do adding and subtracting. Adding is also easy. Subtracting is kind of hard but I practice! How much do you know about my laptop?                                              

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Amber Ann’s Expository Post

January 27th, 2009 · No Comments

 My Purple Pony

By Amber Ann

 

            My favorite closet is full but my favorite toy is my purple sparkly pony. My pony is also white. It does lots of things. For example, there is a white button to make it jump. About the button there is another button to make it talk. 

            Now you know my secret. Now, I am going to tell you about the best toy contest in Kansas. Children and their families were there with their toys. I took my pony to the contest. Then I showed what it could do. Last, bam I won the contest! I won a golden metal and it shines. Finally, I went home.  

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Jose’s expository post

January 27th, 2009 · 1 Comment

 Hot Wheels

By Jose

 

            My favorite toys are Hot Wheels. My Hot Wheels are different colors and different designs.  An example is that they have flames and stripes. Another example is that they have blue, orange and other colors. My Hot Wheels are the best cars. They     have different materials that are hard plastic and metal. One of my tow trucks is made of metal. Most of my Hot Wheels are hard plastic.

            The characteristics of Hot Wheels cars are very interesting.  One detail is they go fast. They go fast because I push them.  How much do you know about Hot Wheels?  I have so many Hot Wheels and I have over ninety! 

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Ivan’s expository post

January 27th, 2009 · 2 Comments

My Favorite Toy

By Ivan

 

            I have a remote control airplane. I can see it clear in the sky. I can spin my airplane in the sky with the colors yellow, red, and black stripes. Whenever my cousin comes to my house I ask him if he could race my airplane but he has to run on the sidewalk. But I win because my airplane is in the air. One morning I gasp! I almost hit the airplane into my narrow hallway. I thought my airplane was going to break so I made a fast turn, I was lucky. Thank you for reading!

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Enrique’s Expository Writing Post

January 26th, 2009 · 1 Comment

The Toy I Like Best of All

By Enrique

I have lots and lots of different kinds of toys under my bed. But I have one favorite toy that I like best of all it is called Legos. I like Legos so much because they are so fun and interesting. The reason I think Legos are interesting is because there are all kinds. Some are small and some are big.

Legos can come in many colors. The colors on mine are blue, black, white, and brown with other colors.This is my idea, always go to the store and buy Legos, any kind you want. If you buy them don’t think they are going to come with fluffy hair. You know why, because, I thought  that when I got my own. They are always going to be hard because they are made of plastic.

           Once again I have lots and lots of toys under my bed but,out of all my toys my

favorite toys are my Legos.

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